Feedback: Student Behaviour

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Karikhuu
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Feedback: Student Behaviour

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
That student’s bad behavior is a matter of significance. Fault for this problem lies with modern lifestyles and a indulgent upbringing, while there is hope for a better future through reforms in education from home to school environment.
It must be understood that the tragedy of poor student behavior is to be explained by a complaisant upbringing, which impacts significantly on the way of behavior. The reality of this situation is that working parents often pay more attention to their jobs without worring about the duty to educate their children which results in the decline of moral standards . Under these conditions, it is predictable for students to lose parental care as well as teaching.
There are other reasons for the lack of respect in student’s communication approach , of which a contemporary life is a prominent one. As is widely known, many students has been affected by the current trend of modern interaction . Not only do they behaves improperly with elderly people, they also interact with their friends in an unfriendly way. The outcome has been a stubborn and impolie character in their mature life.
Perhaps an agenda of comprehensive behavior modification to schooling system is needed to allay the state of unkindly facing students today. Turning away from the focus on primary and secondary schools , a program of suitable education is required to reverse the problems at hand. This idea is based on the premise that teenagers are affected by lots of factors that are able to spoil their spirit, which is the appropriate age to change their mind towards behaviour. It is abundantly clear that a right method in time will impove student dignity.
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saqibali
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Re: Feedback: Student Behaviour

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