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[fahim]

TOPIC
Computers have changed the way people study.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of using computers as study aids?

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with the advancement of technology, people have start to develop new habits with daily life style and the impact it appearent
since it has effected human completely inclduing food,clothing to dressing similarly it has effected on study pattern.

earlier there would be other ways of reading and writing there but since human evolve towards moderanization book is the one
of the major source of getting education apart from newspaper or other available sources.

but fact is quiet change now, book has now become secondary source for study, computer in todays world have taken the responsibilty to
educate people.

use of computer has both pros and cons, some of the advantages of using computers are, one can have quick access to desired
material, one can also varify any info with distance of few clicks.on any single topic we can have thousands of books, articles and publications
available and those who find book reading to be boring can also spend thier time with online books or articles which are much
interesting with the help of attractive web interface.

along with the benefits, there are some obvoius disadvantages do exist few includes relying too much on material available on internet
as computer is open source so data varification is most significant issue of todays era,further people can't concentrate on the study only
as computer always attract you for multitasking which leads towards wasting soo much precious time, obsesty and eye weakness
is another gift of computer.

overall its depend on the person how he/she prioritise thier life, those who have aims always take any technlogical invention as blessings.

[saqibali]

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