Job Rejection Letter ( Please evaluate my work)

[Aditi]

Please review my work. and comment where I can improve

You have received notice that your application for a position with a company in your city has been rejected for an unclear reason.
Write a letter to the recruiter. In your letter
describe what the position is
explain why the rejection is unclear
state why you feel you would be a good choice for the position


Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ____________________,

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing in reply to the notice that I received this morning via my email. I am very surprised to know that my job application has been rejected and the reasons are still unclear. Please allow me to explain.

The position I am referring is Software Developer in White Gold Company, and the position was advertised in Sydney morning Herald on 21st of August. Actually, I am very disappointed to know about declination of my job application because I enclosed my entire certificates and experiences letter with it. Furthermore, I believe I meet all the essential as well as additional requirements the position prefers.

I would be grateful if you review my application again and make a decision. I ensure you that I will be an asset for the company, and my understandings and knowledge will definitely increase the profitability of the business.
If you find my skills and experiences suitable for the position, please contact me to schedule an interview.

Yours Faithfully,
Aditi Khatiwada

[saqibali]

Please rewrite this letter and take the SUBJECT /TOPIC into consideration before you write ANY SENTENCE.
Some sentences are out of topic