Task 2, please give me a band score
Posted: Sun Sep 21, 2014 4:15 pm
Question- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe, that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The best guide for little children is represented by parents as well as by teachers at school.
When an infant borns in the word he or she needs a guide, otherwise the baby will be alone. A baby who is alone will not have an easy life, it is the nature’s law. So the first guide for little children is represented by the parents. “Mum” and “pap” are often the first word that a baby says.
A child learns many things from parents, but this only happens if parents are really worried for their baby.
Also if it is so, a child needs to learn many and many things, and as a consequence there is the necessity of a variety of people that teach these things to the child. Can a mum alone, who is also busy whit her work, teach to her child all the things that are necessary in our dangerous society? The simple answer is that although she can, the contact whit other people is fundamental for the child.
So the suggestion about the role of the school in the education of children is that teachers and parents have to cooperate in order to help children to learn many and many things. The contact with people which are external to the family is a strong stimulus for the development of children’s brain.
Sometimes parents are in contrast with the education which is given into the schools, because the schools are also a vehicle of miseducation in various ways. If a child begins to have a wrong behavior, a mum should only explain that such thing isn’t the right thing to do, and then she have to convince the child of this.
Can you give me a band score, please? And what is your opinion about this essay?
The best guide for little children is represented by parents as well as by teachers at school.
When an infant borns in the word he or she needs a guide, otherwise the baby will be alone. A baby who is alone will not have an easy life, it is the nature’s law. So the first guide for little children is represented by the parents. “Mum” and “pap” are often the first word that a baby says.
A child learns many things from parents, but this only happens if parents are really worried for their baby.
Also if it is so, a child needs to learn many and many things, and as a consequence there is the necessity of a variety of people that teach these things to the child. Can a mum alone, who is also busy whit her work, teach to her child all the things that are necessary in our dangerous society? The simple answer is that although she can, the contact whit other people is fundamental for the child.
So the suggestion about the role of the school in the education of children is that teachers and parents have to cooperate in order to help children to learn many and many things. The contact with people which are external to the family is a strong stimulus for the development of children’s brain.
Sometimes parents are in contrast with the education which is given into the schools, because the schools are also a vehicle of miseducation in various ways. If a child begins to have a wrong behavior, a mum should only explain that such thing isn’t the right thing to do, and then she have to convince the child of this.
Can you give me a band score, please? And what is your opinion about this essay?