Hi,
I have been following the videos by Ryan over Youtube and it has been really helpful so far. Though I am pretty much confused as over the internet I have seen essays where people often uses words like I, We, Me which ideally should not be used and those essay's are marked as band 9. So is it fine to use these words?
Also, the structure has been explained as :
Intro
Supporting Para 1
Supporting Para 2
Concluding
But I have seen many essays which are not following this structure, still they are marked as good.
http://www.ielts-exam.net/general_pract ... ask_2/552/
http://www.ielts-exam.net/general_pract ... ask_2/547/
Please explain, which one to follow & why?