Travel or not to travel

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Hello guys. Could you please look through my essay and give some feedback. Would be grateful for any responses and comments.


Nowadays, more and more people are tend to emigrate to other countries in order to find a better job or education. This may bring a great benefit to these people, however, these people may also suffer from downsides of living abroad. In this essay I am going discuss some points of situation which I stated before.
Firstly, we can mark out that, for everyone travelling could be the best mean for personal growth. This broadens their horizons, they meet a lot of different people and they become more culturally-aware. People who have been abroad often are far more interesting persons than people who have not. Underlying reason is that during their arrival in other countries they shared various experience with people who have another cultural background and view of life, which often widens their outlook.
Secondly, people who are intended to leave their motherland always seeking better life. Thousands of people are moving from poor countries to the more successful countries as they are not happy with quality of life in their own. New countries they move in could provide them with better working and living conditions. However, after living some time in other country, for several reasons people could decide to come back to their own homeland. These people are more demanded in their own country as they have experience and knowledge which could be useful there.
All in all I could say that living and travelling abroad is not easy and not affordable thing for everyone. However advantages of it could outweigh and price you have paid will be compensated in a long-time period.

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Nowadays, more and more people are tending to emigrate to other countries in order to find a better job or education. This may bring a great benefit to these people, however, they may also suffer from the downsides of living abroad. In this essay I am going discuss the benefits and disadvantages of moving abroad.
Firstly, for many people, travelling is the best means for personal growth. This broadens their horizons, they meet a lot of different people and they become more culturally aware. People who have been abroad are often far more interesting than people who have not. An underlying reason for this is that, during their time in other countries, they shared various experiences with people who had another cultural background and view of life, which often widens their outlook.

Secondly, people who are intent on leaving their motherland are always seeking better life. Thousands of people are moving from poor countries to more developed countries as they are not happy with the quality of life in their own. The countries they move to could provide them with better working and living conditions. However, after living some time in another country, for several reasons people decide to return to their own homeland. These people are in demand in their own country as they have experience and knowledge which could be useful there.
All in all, living and travelling abroad is not easy and not affordable for everyone. However the advantages outweigh the disadvantages, and the expense will be regained over a long-time period.