my first writing task 1 could you please correct
Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2014 7:34 am
The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
ANSWER -
The data suggests that , In 1900 year negligible water usage was observed for industrial and domestic use .Industrial use remained constant for 50 years.but it had steady increase for next 50 decades almost 800 km 3 .whereas agriculture usage was nearby 500 km 3 water in 1900,which doubled thrice by 3000 km 3 in 20th century.furthermore table data shows that Brazil population (176 million) consumed 26,500km3 which is more than 260 times from Congo consumption of water (100km2)in the year 2000.
To summarize ,in the year 2000 water used by agriculture was highest from others and also significantly Brazil consumption of water was more in the same year.
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
ANSWER -
The data suggests that , In 1900 year negligible water usage was observed for industrial and domestic use .Industrial use remained constant for 50 years.but it had steady increase for next 50 decades almost 800 km 3 .whereas agriculture usage was nearby 500 km 3 water in 1900,which doubled thrice by 3000 km 3 in 20th century.furthermore table data shows that Brazil population (176 million) consumed 26,500km3 which is more than 260 times from Congo consumption of water (100km2)in the year 2000.
To summarize ,in the year 2000 water used by agriculture was highest from others and also significantly Brazil consumption of water was more in the same year.