Last week i have organized a Fun activity in my office, and have invited couple of people from the senior management as chief guests.
Convey your thank you message to the guests,
Tell them what difference they have made to the event
And what is your plan to publish the event details
Dear Guests A & B
I am writing this to you to thank you for all your interest in participating in the fun activity conducted last week at our office.
First of all on behalf of our entire business division, i would like to appreciate your efforts to finding time out of your busy calendars, and making it to the event.
It was great to have senior people of the establishment with tons of experience on the event day.
Secondly, the speech on the event day by Mr.A was awe inspiring and truly motivational. Every one of us had a message from that wonderful speech.
Looking at the participation in the team building activities, i would say it was the best part of the event. Mrs. B's game sprit was truly inspiring.
Moving on to the publicity and marketing this charity event, i am planning to post the details of the event as an article in our weekly magazine, which will be circulated throughout the establishment.
Finally i admit that it's all the team work that paid off. I would like to thank each and every one who took part in this event and made it a grand success.
With Regards & Thanks,
Raul
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