General writing Task 2 - Please prove feedback

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raulravi
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General writing Task 2 - Please prove feedback

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Many people believe that the main aim for university education is to help graduates to find better jobs, while some people believe that university education has wider benefits for individual and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion


To be honest the topic of university education is very important concern of the society. University Education is one of the most important things in everyone’s life. Everyone has got their own opinion on university education. Many believe It plays a key role in getting a better job. While at the same time others believe that University education has got much more to do with your social life, that just getting a job.


Firstly, in this contemporary world of technology, University Graduation has become the basic eligibility to find a better job. All the top companies are looking for young university graduates, who can join the companies, which will bring fresh thoughts or ideas to their business. And in addition to that most of the universities have got a placement cell department with in their campus. And it is found to be the easiest way to find a job through the placement cell, even before the completion of the final year studies at university. For example, in my university I was one of the students who got selected for a job on day zero. But unfortunately couple of my batch mates failed to make it to the university are still struggling to find a decent job. So considering the current working model of the educations and job markets, one can say University education is the best way to find a job.

However, looking at the other aspects of society, university education is not just merely to find a job. It has got a bag full of benefits which will be fruitful for the individual and the society in the long run. And university education helps a person in getting exposure to all kinds of situations in one’s life. It teaches you how to deal with real life scenarios. For instance, a person without a UG can come out and become an successful entrepreneur, but it’s also important to earn social respect. And when the people in the society are well educated, it helps to overcome the major problems like corruption and unemployment. A society with well-educated people will be a healthy one, and always looking forward to a bright future.


So finally considering all the possible aspects of the university education, one can conclude that though university education is helpful in finding a job, it is much more important to realize that it helps everyone to improve and groom oneself as a good individual, which intern helps in building a better society.
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