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Posted: Mon Sep 29, 2014 12:42 pm
Information technology advance Negative or positive?
The development in a lot of matters related to information technology in the last 20 years has had many changes in all the society, life style, work, sports, entertainment and others for both sides negative and positive, but like always is in the hand and mind of people to use this tools, and the must of times the negative part wins the choice.
Firstly and one of the most important qualities of the dramatically advance of the IT are the faster, simpler and efficient ways of communication. Through E-mail and others types of sophisticated software the companies in a variety of sectors achieve to generated better quality in services, improve of products and client attention. Not only the industrial business has gained and advantage with IT, entertainment industry also has a new weapon to attack the consumer, the World Wide Web has brought social networks, personalized webs page between others which are used to bomb all the consumers with high doses of publicity, propaganda and campaigns all these tools to provoke a higher rate of consumption among the society.
Second, some of the IT tools develop in these 20 years has been used to harm the society, the governments, the citizen and all people that have access to a computer, for the same reason that a pen can kill a men, because in a particular moment the human nature take control of that tools and turned into a weapon, for example virus in E-mails to steal password and credits card numbers. Finally all the progress and development from the outstanding IT can be used to financial gains, as a weapon of crime or just as the tool to improve the world to be a better place to live the choice will be always in our hands.
The development in a lot of matters related to information technology in the last 20 years has had many changes in all the society, life style, work, sports, entertainment and others for both sides negative and positive, but like always is in the hand and mind of people to use this tools, and the must of times the negative part wins the choice.
Firstly and one of the most important qualities of the dramatically advance of the IT are the faster, simpler and efficient ways of communication. Through E-mail and others types of sophisticated software the companies in a variety of sectors achieve to generated better quality in services, improve of products and client attention. Not only the industrial business has gained and advantage with IT, entertainment industry also has a new weapon to attack the consumer, the World Wide Web has brought social networks, personalized webs page between others which are used to bomb all the consumers with high doses of publicity, propaganda and campaigns all these tools to provoke a higher rate of consumption among the society.
Second, some of the IT tools develop in these 20 years has been used to harm the society, the governments, the citizen and all people that have access to a computer, for the same reason that a pen can kill a men, because in a particular moment the human nature take control of that tools and turned into a weapon, for example virus in E-mails to steal password and credits card numbers. Finally all the progress and development from the outstanding IT can be used to financial gains, as a weapon of crime or just as the tool to improve the world to be a better place to live the choice will be always in our hands.