IELTS GT Writing Task 1 - Pls Comment on my letter attempt 2
Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2014 11:06 am
You forgot a coat at your friend’s house last weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say
-where do you think it might be?
-what does the coat look like?
-Suggest some options to get it back
Dear John,
First of all let me forward my heartiest thanks to you and Emma for providing me with the best possible accommodation I could have expected during may visit in last weekend. Another reason why I am writing is recklessly I have forgotten my favourite coat just before I left.
As I got caught in rain on my way to your place, I used the drier which was placed to the left corner of the room and hanged it in the wall mounted hanger. Because it was a gift from my wife on our engagement day, can you imagine my feelings after I learned that I have left it at your place. Furthermore, it is navy blue “Hameedia” made and the label can be seen clearly in the inner left side, just below the pocket.
Since I want to wear it on my graduation day, which is coming on next week, I would like you to send it by express mail, where I can receive it within 3 days if you post it tomorrow. I am so sorry to bother you again, but I will owe you if you do so, and I want my wife to be surprised seeing me wearing it during the graduation.
Please reply me with your bank account details, and I will credit the delivery charges. I hope this plan is acceptable to you. Thank you once again.
Yours,
Smith
-where do you think it might be?
-what does the coat look like?
-Suggest some options to get it back
Dear John,
First of all let me forward my heartiest thanks to you and Emma for providing me with the best possible accommodation I could have expected during may visit in last weekend. Another reason why I am writing is recklessly I have forgotten my favourite coat just before I left.
As I got caught in rain on my way to your place, I used the drier which was placed to the left corner of the room and hanged it in the wall mounted hanger. Because it was a gift from my wife on our engagement day, can you imagine my feelings after I learned that I have left it at your place. Furthermore, it is navy blue “Hameedia” made and the label can be seen clearly in the inner left side, just below the pocket.
Since I want to wear it on my graduation day, which is coming on next week, I would like you to send it by express mail, where I can receive it within 3 days if you post it tomorrow. I am so sorry to bother you again, but I will owe you if you do so, and I want my wife to be surprised seeing me wearing it during the graduation.
Please reply me with your bank account details, and I will credit the delivery charges. I hope this plan is acceptable to you. Thank you once again.
Yours,
Smith