A complain letter regarding an evening course

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QUESTIONYou attend an evening course in a school, but you find that the course is different from what is described on the course brochure. Write a letter to the school. In your letter,

1. explain the detail of evening course

2. explain the difference

3. suggest what actions school should take

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to bring to your attention a course complaint issue about a evening course of computer hardware repqire.

I have taken the course for 2 months. The evening course divides into two parts which totally last two hours. In the first part, the teacher explains some theory knowledge of the repairing technology from the handouts. In the last part, we have a review course which we actually study by ourself and look back to what have taught in previous courses by the notebooks.

As time past by, we find that the course has a huge difference from what it claims from the leaflet which was distributed to us before our decision of joining the course. In the advertising materials, the hands on skills contents were highlighted and the operation practices were stated clearly. However, 1/3 courses have finished, anyone of us has neither repaired a piece of hardware from a computer nor analysed a defect sample in the real course. All what we have learned still remain in the theoretical stage. All of these can not held us from worring about the final effect of our study.

Hence, I strongly suggest to introduce actual practice course immediately, which can help us to improve our hands on skills in reality operation, to replace the current review course as the second part of our every day study duty. To achieve this, 20 computers with hardware problems should be supplied as the necessaries in the course to guarantee every apprentice have the objects to practice the skills. Apart from this, a senior teacher who is specialized in actual repair instruction should be allocated if it is available.

I look forward to your early response.

Your faithfully,
Jones Smith

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How much time did you took to write that letter ,ITS above 290 words