IELTS Writting Task 1 .. plz mark and comments are welcomed

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IELTS Writting Task 1 .. plz mark and comments are welcomed

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The bar chart shows gender distribution among teachers in six educational stages in UK in 2010.

Female teachers were highly represented in pre-primary and primary school by about 96 % and 92 % respectively.While as, there were almost equal proportions of men and women teachers in the intermediate stages: Secondary school,college and private training institute.

Male teachers began to have a resonable presence start from secondary school by about 44% versus 46% for female teachers, then in the college there was an equal proportions.They continued to increase gradually until reach their peak at university stage by almost 70 % male teachers versus 30 % female teachers.

Overall, It's obvious that in Uk in that time, Elementary and primary School's teachers were female-dominated while male teachers occupied a large proportion in the late stages of education.
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