Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood.

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Rutul
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Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood.

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"Life is worse without mother". I still believe that father and mother both have their own responsibility.No one can play their role. In the following paragraph, I will support my answer with a few logical statements and necessary illustrations.

There are many wonderful things that the God has designed in the world but not much than a "Mother".
In 19th century,mother was only responsible for breeding her offspring. She was playing a role of housewife and other social responsibility while father was supposed to provide financial support to whole family including home budget, future plan and so on.Consequently, literacy ratio of women was extremely poor compared to men as they were forced to get engage in 13-15 years age. Gradually parents put more emphasize on their children's education for both male and female sex and today result is in front of us. For instance, in a corporate company women are at the same role as men. Furthermore, demand of women is grown in some area compared to men.They(Parents) can breed their child together so that their juvenile can live better life in future by taking experience from both which was missing in 19th century. Today father is taking care of home and children while mother is doing job and provides financial support to the family. This is specially applicable for both middle class and lower class family. Parents work by day and night and build their children's future. As an example, a news was published in a paper that girl got a government job with smart salary. Her father was a auto driver and mother was doing cleaning job. There are plentiful such examples which become inspiration for young generation.

In a nutshell, the bottom line is that both men and women together build up their child in a better way.
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Re: Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood.

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Rutul wrote:"Life is worse without mother". I still believe that father and mother both have their own responsibility.No one can play their role. In the following paragraph, I will support my answer with a few logical statements and necessary illustrations.

There are many wonderful things that God has designed in the world, but nothing is more important than a "Mother".
In the 19th century, only Mother was responsible for raising her offspring. She was playing the role of housewife with other social responsibilities while Father was supposed to provide financial support for the whole family including a home budget, future plan and so on. Consequently, the literacy rate of women was extremely poor compared to men as they were forced to get engaged when they were 13-15 years old. Gradually, parents put more emphasis on their children's education for both males and females and today the result is in front of us. For instance, in a corporate company women are taking the same roles as men. Furthermore, demand for women has grown in some areas compared to men. They (parents) can raise their child together so that their offspring can live a better life in the future by taking experience from both which was missing in the 19th century. Today, Father is taking care of the home and children while Mother is working and providing financial support to the family. This is specially applicable for both middle class and lower class families. Parents work by day and night and build their children's future. As an example, an article was published in a paper that a woman got a government job with a smart salary. Her father was an auto driver and her mother was doing a cleaning job. There are many such examples which become inspiration for the younger generation.

In a nutshell, the bottom line is that both men and women together build up their child in a better way.
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