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Rate my task 1 table essay

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This table shows predicted figures of UK's population as well as the number of people who are aged 75+ and their proportion to total population for a time-frame from the year 2015 to 2070. It is clear from the table, that the population in UK will be growing in numbers during this time-frame, as will the number of people who are 75 years old and higher.

It is predicted, that by 2015 total population of the UK will be close to 65 million people, of which almost five and a half will be people aged 75+ years. For the next 20 years the total number of people in the country will be experiencing a stable growth in every 5 years. The percentage of people of 75 years old and higher will be rising as well, from a little more than eight percent to slightly more than twelve percent in 2030, which in turn means, that there will be more 75+ aged people for every habitat of the UK.

For the next 15 years up until 2050 total population of the UK will still be seeing growth in numbers, as will the number of people aged 75+, but their proportion to total population will decrease by roughly one and a half percent. Starting from 2050 to 2070 the number of people dwelling in the UK will substantially grow from 77 million to 82 million people. Population aged 75+ will also experience a notable growth from 9 million to 11-12 million, as well as the percentage of this group of people, reaching a maximum of nearly 15% of the total UK's population.

In overall, it is clear that the population in the UK is predicted to grow withing this time-frame, the number of people aged 75+ years will also increase, as well as their proportion to total population in the country.
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Ser-Gio wrote:This table shows predicted figures of UK's population as well as the number of people are aged 75+ and their proportion to the total population from 2015 to 2070. It is clear from the table that the population in UK will be growing in numbers during this period, as will the number of people who are 75 years and older.

It is predicted that by 2015, the total population of the UK will be close to 65 million people, of which almost five and a half million will be people aged 75+ years. For the next 20 years, the total number of people in the country will be experiencing stable growth. The percentage of people aged 75 years and upwill rise as well, from a little more than eight percent to slightly more than twelve percent in 2030, which in turn means, that there will be more 75+ aged people for every area of the UK.

For the next 15 years up until 2050, the total population of the UK will still be seeing growth in numbers, as will the number of people aged 75+, but their proportion to the total population will decrease by roughly one and a half percent. From 2050 to 2070, the number of people dwelling in the UK will substantially grow from 77 million to 82 million people. The population aged 75+ will also experience a notable growth from 9 million to 11-12 million, as well as the percentage of this group of people, reaching a maximum of nearly 15% of the total population in the UK.

In overall, it is clear that the population in the UK is predicted to grow during this period, the number of people aged 75+ years will also increase, as well as their proportion to the total population in the country.
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