Please comments on and give me band of my two IELTS "task 2"
Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2015 2:11 pm
Test A
Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work.
How do you think children should spend their free time?
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Some people assert that children should be assigned more homework in their spare time. Unfortunately, some other people disagree with it. In my point of view, proper school work with some disposable time benefits more for pupils’ development.
First of all, the homework could consolidate the knowledge learned from the class. Obviously, it is easy for school student to forget the key points mentioned by teachers in the classes. Some exercises help the pupil to recall and summarize what they learn. For example, according to the statistics collected by some education department in China recently, the average graduation examination score for student who assigned 1 hour daily homework is much higher than that never or rarely take any study after school.
In the second place, proper school assignment could develop pupils’ learning habit. It is well-accepted that the children under 10 years old have limited self-control or time management skill. Usually they waste their spare time on playing video games or watching soup opera provided that no homework after school. The case of Chinese famous mathematician Chen Jingrun can be the classical illustration of the view; he told a reporter during an interview that all of his achievement was based on the habit that he was developed during his primary school where he had to spend nearly 3 hours for his mathematics homework.
In conclusion, it is essential for children to take some school assignment in their spare time to consolidate their knowledge learning and develop a good learning habit.
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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work.
How do you think children should spend their free time?
========================My response below==================
Some people assert that children should be assigned more homework in their spare time. Unfortunately, some other people disagree with it. In my point of view, proper school work with some disposable time benefits more for pupils’ development.
First of all, the homework could consolidate the knowledge learned from the class. Obviously, it is easy for school student to forget the key points mentioned by teachers in the classes. Some exercises help the pupil to recall and summarize what they learn. For example, according to the statistics collected by some education department in China recently, the average graduation examination score for student who assigned 1 hour daily homework is much higher than that never or rarely take any study after school.
In the second place, proper school assignment could develop pupils’ learning habit. It is well-accepted that the children under 10 years old have limited self-control or time management skill. Usually they waste their spare time on playing video games or watching soup opera provided that no homework after school. The case of Chinese famous mathematician Chen Jingrun can be the classical illustration of the view; he told a reporter during an interview that all of his achievement was based on the habit that he was developed during his primary school where he had to spend nearly 3 hours for his mathematics homework.
In conclusion, it is essential for children to take some school assignment in their spare time to consolidate their knowledge learning and develop a good learning habit.
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