Please assess my writing task 2..my first time here!
Posted: Mon Feb 23, 2015 10:34 am
The topic was : More people are going to universities these days than in the past, they start to work later in life but with higher qualifications.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?
MY ESSAY:
Education is becoming a key requirement for almost all jobs, hence the majority of students decide to go to the university before starting their careers, although many parents may consider that their sons will start employment at older age, but many others say that with a university degree their horizons would be broaden, and they will have more chance to find a rewarding job.Arguably the point have both advantages and disadvantages.
It appears that the world of employment is escalating its demands.For instance, high school graduates face huge difficulties in finding a decent job as a result of competition with others with higher qualifications. This is why they seek to go to college and build a more substantial resume with which they can compete in the work market. Hence having a higher degree will surely increase their chances to get a respected job.
However many parents try to push their offspring to start working earlier. As an example, many families particularly those with low income encourage their sons and daughters to have a job as soon as possible, because they think this will make them more responsible and independent and at the same time increase their social skills, while going to college will delay this development, and that's why many people consider going to college is a waste of time and money.
To sum thing up, there are a lot of positive and negative aspects of delaying employment after university. Personally I believe that every high school graduate should continue his studies and acquire a university degree. not only it would be easier to get a decent job, but also the whole society would be more educated and producing.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development ?
MY ESSAY:
Education is becoming a key requirement for almost all jobs, hence the majority of students decide to go to the university before starting their careers, although many parents may consider that their sons will start employment at older age, but many others say that with a university degree their horizons would be broaden, and they will have more chance to find a rewarding job.Arguably the point have both advantages and disadvantages.
It appears that the world of employment is escalating its demands.For instance, high school graduates face huge difficulties in finding a decent job as a result of competition with others with higher qualifications. This is why they seek to go to college and build a more substantial resume with which they can compete in the work market. Hence having a higher degree will surely increase their chances to get a respected job.
However many parents try to push their offspring to start working earlier. As an example, many families particularly those with low income encourage their sons and daughters to have a job as soon as possible, because they think this will make them more responsible and independent and at the same time increase their social skills, while going to college will delay this development, and that's why many people consider going to college is a waste of time and money.
To sum thing up, there are a lot of positive and negative aspects of delaying employment after university. Personally I believe that every high school graduate should continue his studies and acquire a university degree. not only it would be easier to get a decent job, but also the whole society would be more educated and producing.
