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Posted: Mon Jan 20, 2014 8:04 am
This is my paragraph about the topic " Prevent climate change. Possible? "
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Can humans prevent climate change? In fact it is certainly too late to stop all climate change and we are facing the impacts of climate change such as global warming, sea level rising, droughts, floods, storms and heat waves. However, climate change is not an on-off switch; they are continuing processes so we can reduce the effect of our life on the climate change and avoid the global further warming. Many scientists believe that we have to change our lifestyle to reduce climate change by doing some things easy, for instance, recycling, reducing waste, saving energy, and using mass transit instead of private transportation. In addition, we can do other things more difficult. For example, the government should increase the environmental tax which refers to taxes intended to promote ecologically sustainable activities via economic incentives. On the other hand, they have to extend projects which can invent a new renewable energy instead of exploiting a fossil energy. To sum up, our solution probably will not be completely successful but we should still try to do everything we can to decreasing the climate change.
Please give me any feedback, thanks a lot.
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Can humans prevent climate change? In fact it is certainly too late to stop all climate change and we are facing the impacts of climate change such as global warming, sea level rising, droughts, floods, storms and heat waves. However, climate change is not an on-off switch; they are continuing processes so we can reduce the effect of our life on the climate change and avoid the global further warming. Many scientists believe that we have to change our lifestyle to reduce climate change by doing some things easy, for instance, recycling, reducing waste, saving energy, and using mass transit instead of private transportation. In addition, we can do other things more difficult. For example, the government should increase the environmental tax which refers to taxes intended to promote ecologically sustainable activities via economic incentives. On the other hand, they have to extend projects which can invent a new renewable energy instead of exploiting a fossil energy. To sum up, our solution probably will not be completely successful but we should still try to do everything we can to decreasing the climate change.