GT -WRITING TASK 1... PLS RATE

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ajaykpat
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GT -WRITING TASK 1... PLS RATE

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QUESTION


You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays.
You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• explain what experience and special skills you have
• explain why you are interested in the job

ANSWER:


Dear Sir / Madam,
I am writing to you on a subject relating to your advertisement in today’s newspaper for a job working in the city museum shop during the holidays. I think I am an ideal candidate for this position.
Since childhood, I have been very much interested in knowing about history and different cultures. Currently I am pursuing my bachelors in arts with history as my main elective. Due to this I am having a fair amount of knowledge on this subject. Also I am very good at explaining the subject to the audience , this will make me more suitable for your requirement .
If I am selected for this position , this will help me to acquire additional knowledge in my study. Furthermore, with this part time job I will get some financial assistance for my college study.
Hoping for an affirmative response from your side.

Yours faithfully,

AJp
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ajaykpat wrote:QUESTION


You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays.
You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• explain what experience and special skills you have
• explain why you are interested in the job

ANSWER:


Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to you on a subject relating to your advertisement in today’s newspaper for a job working in the city museum shop during the holidays.(<--Reword to: "I am writing regarding your advertisement in today's newspaper for a job in the city museum shop during the holidays.") I think I am an ideal candidate for this position.

Since childhood, I have been very interested in history and different cultures. Currently I am pursuing my Bachelor's Degree in Arts with history as my main elective. Due to this I have a fair amount of knowledge on this subject. Also, I am very good at explaining history to an audience, which makes me more suitable for the position.

If I am selected for this position, this will help me to acquire additional knowledge in my study. Furthermore, with this part time job I will get some financial assistance for my college study. Hoping for an affirmative response from your side.(<--Reword to: "I look forward to hearing from you.")

Yours faithfully,

AJp
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