Please evaluate "Writing Task 2"
Posted: Tue Jan 21, 2014 12:03 pm
Hi, Please analyze my writing. The topic and response are as follows:
How much score do you think this topic worth?
Topic: Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Response:
Humans have always learnt second language to communicate with other people for different purposes. Bilinguals started to adapt to the language that has been dominant socially and tis the reason why several languages die out. It is argued that speaking fewer languages in the world could ease communication between people and thus, the life. Speaking common languages can help tremendous growth in the field of education and trade, this claim will be proved and supported in the essay below.
Firstly, there would be great advancement in the field of education if the factor of language barrier is eliminated. For example, Germany has the best engineering universities in the world but many foreign students may not enroll due to the language problem. Although many German Universities offer free education. Having a common language could have made it easier, for students with great potential, to study in the world renowned German universities. It is for this reason, the idea of fewer languages across the world is supported.
Secondly, with the development in technology, people now trade all over the world and for effective trading, speaking common language is essential. Take China, for instance, there is a huge communication gap while trading with them. Trade could become easier by eliminating these language barriers. Many companies find it difficult to conduct business in China because they are not able to communicate directly and without understanding the business requirement, it is not possible to conduct business. This clearly shows that how speaking common language is central to trade among different countries.
In conclusion, it is clearly seen that how speaking common languages in the world will help growth and ease in the field of education and trade. There is no point of having so many languages. It is predicted that more and more people will engage in the practice of using a common language for communication the world over.
How much score do you think this topic worth?
Topic: Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Response:
Humans have always learnt second language to communicate with other people for different purposes. Bilinguals started to adapt to the language that has been dominant socially and tis the reason why several languages die out. It is argued that speaking fewer languages in the world could ease communication between people and thus, the life. Speaking common languages can help tremendous growth in the field of education and trade, this claim will be proved and supported in the essay below.
Firstly, there would be great advancement in the field of education if the factor of language barrier is eliminated. For example, Germany has the best engineering universities in the world but many foreign students may not enroll due to the language problem. Although many German Universities offer free education. Having a common language could have made it easier, for students with great potential, to study in the world renowned German universities. It is for this reason, the idea of fewer languages across the world is supported.
Secondly, with the development in technology, people now trade all over the world and for effective trading, speaking common language is essential. Take China, for instance, there is a huge communication gap while trading with them. Trade could become easier by eliminating these language barriers. Many companies find it difficult to conduct business in China because they are not able to communicate directly and without understanding the business requirement, it is not possible to conduct business. This clearly shows that how speaking common language is central to trade among different countries.
In conclusion, it is clearly seen that how speaking common languages in the world will help growth and ease in the field of education and trade. There is no point of having so many languages. It is predicted that more and more people will engage in the practice of using a common language for communication the world over.