Writing Task 1 Academic (Map)

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The pictures present the changes of Queen Mary Hospital’s place that located in Main Road Street after it was constructed in 1960. There were several changes of some buildings in 1980 and 2000, such as enlarging and minimizing. Overall, although some new constructions were made, the Hospital’s size was same as its construction in 1960.

It can be seen from the pictures, in 1960, there were three buildings that built with the same size, for example, Shopping Centre, Hospital, and Car Park. There was also Firmland that located at the left side of Car Park. On the other hand, while the Hospital still in its size, the new construction was made in 1980 by adding the Pharmachy’s part at the left side. Besides, there was not Shopping Centre, and it changed as Cancer Centre which using a halp size of Shopping Centre while a half other is used for Pharmachy’s built.

Meanwhile, Nursing School was also built in 1980 by using Firmland’s location. Both Car Park and Nursing School were had same size, and their size became rebuilt into a half size in 2000. Also, Cancer Centre was expaded using Nursing School’s space.

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The pictures represent the changes to Queen Mary Hospital that is located on Main Road since its construction in 1960. There were several changes in 1980 and 2000, such as enlarging and decreasing building sizes. Overall, although some new construction was undertaken, the hospital’s size has remained the same since 1960.

It can be seen from the pictures, in 1960, there were three buildings of the same size, a Shopping Centre, a Hospital, and a Car Park. There was also Farmland located to the left of the Car Park. On the other hand, while the Hospital still in its size, the new construction was made in 1980 by adding the Pharmachy’s part at the left side.(<--Reword to: "In 1980, a pharmacy was added to the hospital and the shopping centre became a cancer centre. The car park was not changed.")

Also, a Nursing School was built in 1980 where farmland used to be. The Car Park and Nursing School were the same size. In 2000, the cancer centre was doubled, while the nursing school and car park were halved to make room.