Kindly assess my essay
Posted: Wed Mar 25, 2015 6:04 pm
Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of government of poorer nations to look after their citizen themselves?
After reckoning enough, I believe that rich or modernized nations should be sharing their wealth and resources with those inferior or pauper nations who are starveling and struggling with their system, because there will be certain hard time which comes to everyone, so for the sake of humanity, such aid should be provided.
First of all, there are many countries which are going through some seriously astounding crisis, such as, illiteracy, crashed economy, hunger, no possessions, corrupt leaders, infectious diseases and extremism. If you contemplate these factors closely then you start to realize that everything is directly proportional to eachother. We live in a world, where the ratio of diseases and terrorism is increasing exponentially and we are being victimized of it’s brutality, the good example of this is, Pakistan, Iraq, Afghanistan, Africa and India. Extremist and terrorist often recruit people, who are illiterate and have no conscience over anything. That is why proper education should be provided to those countries where such extremism is ignited over hunger and illiteracy.
On the contrary, it should be government’s number first priority to look after their citizens and provide them basic necessities, that is why we elect them to be our savior and be ready to face any catastrophe which comes along.
To sum up, I would like to maintain that, instead of being ramified, let’s be unanimous and provide an aid of education and food to those countries which are not up to the standards as of first-world countries, even if their government fails to sustain it.
After reckoning enough, I believe that rich or modernized nations should be sharing their wealth and resources with those inferior or pauper nations who are starveling and struggling with their system, because there will be certain hard time which comes to everyone, so for the sake of humanity, such aid should be provided.
First of all, there are many countries which are going through some seriously astounding crisis, such as, illiteracy, crashed economy, hunger, no possessions, corrupt leaders, infectious diseases and extremism. If you contemplate these factors closely then you start to realize that everything is directly proportional to eachother. We live in a world, where the ratio of diseases and terrorism is increasing exponentially and we are being victimized of it’s brutality, the good example of this is, Pakistan, Iraq, Afghanistan, Africa and India. Extremist and terrorist often recruit people, who are illiterate and have no conscience over anything. That is why proper education should be provided to those countries where such extremism is ignited over hunger and illiteracy.
On the contrary, it should be government’s number first priority to look after their citizens and provide them basic necessities, that is why we elect them to be our savior and be ready to face any catastrophe which comes along.
To sum up, I would like to maintain that, instead of being ramified, let’s be unanimous and provide an aid of education and food to those countries which are not up to the standards as of first-world countries, even if their government fails to sustain it.