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The line grah and table illustrate what the number of overseas visitors to Australia was like during period of 1975 and 2005. There are 6 counties given in the survey , namely South Korea , Japan , China, USA , Britain and Europe.

As the diagrams presented , the figure for 3.2 millon people in Japan ranked top among 6 contries in 1975. Other vistors from Aisa contries , like South Korrea and China standed 2.9millon and 0.3millon respectively. The number of visitors from Britain was triple as many as that of China , more than twice as many as that of USA , but less 0.2millon than that of Europe when it was 1.1milllon in 1975.

In the 30 years later , There was sharply growth occurred in number of visitors from Japan whose porportion reached to 12 millon , still maintaining the peak status among 6 contries. Interestingly , the number of visiors from Europe experienced toppest growth ratio , reaching 4.5 milion , which means that was more than 4 folds ratio comparing to that of former data in 1975. The number of vistors from South Korea, China , USA, Britain also enjoyed the steady-state growth, from 2.9millon to 9.1millon, from 0.3milion to 0.8millon, from 0.4millon to 1.1 millon and from 0.9 millon to 2.9 millon respectively in the period in question.

As far as the overall line gragh was concerned , the world-wide firgue began at 10millon , with 50% rising during the first decade, then meeting tremendous leap from 15millon to 25 millon in 1995, gathering momentum at 30millon finally in 2005

To sum up , it is obvious that more and more people , especial for the vistors from Asia contries , visited the Australia and its sum of number of vistors from the six mentioned contries rised to 30.4 millon from 8.8 millon in 3 decades

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The line grah and table illustrate what the number of overseas visitors to Australia was like during period of 1975 and 2005.(<--Reword to: "The line grah and table illustrate the number of overseas visitors to Australia between 1975 and 2005.") There are 6 counties includedin the survey, namely South Korea, Japan, China, USA, Britain and Europe.

As the diagrams presented , the figure for 3.2 millon people in Japan ranked top among 6 contries in 1975.(<--Reword to: "In 1975, visitors from Japan ranked the highest with 3.2 million.") Other vistors from Aisa contries , like South Korrea and China standed 2.9millon and 0.3millon respectively.(<--Reword to: "Visitors from other Asian countries, South Korea and China, numbered 2.9 million and 0.3 million respectively.") The number of visitors from Britain was three times as high as that of China, more than twice as many as that of USA , but 0.2 millon lower than that of Europe, which was 1.1 milllon in 1975.

In the 30 years later , There was sharply growth occurred in number of visitors from Japan whose porportion reached to 12 millon , still maintaining the peak status among 6 contries.(<--Reword to: "By 2005, Japan's tourist numbers reached 12 million, still the highest number of visitors to Australia.") Interestingly, the number of visitors from Europe experienced the greatest growth ratio, reaching 4.5 milion, which means visitors from Europe increased 4-fold since 1975. The number of visitors from South Korea, China, USA, and Britain also enjoyed steady growth, from 2.9 million to 9.1million, from 0.3 million to 0.8 million, from 0.4 million to 1.1 million, and from 0.9 million to 2.9 million respectively during the period in question.

As far as the overall line gragh was concerned, the world-wide figuree began at 10 million, with a 50% increase during the first decade, then making atremendous leap from 15 million to 25 million in 1995, gathering momentum at 30 million in 2005.

To sum up, it is obvious that more and more people, especially visitors from Asian countries, visited Australia, as its total number of visitors from the six mentioned countries increased to 30.4 million from 8.8 million in 3 decades.