Universities should accept equal number of males and females

[Syed-Nouman]

Gender confliction has always been central to the life of different societies since the dawn of time. Through out history females were considered as an easy prey and have been tested, victimised and challenged in spite of that always prove themselves tenacious.It is agreed that equality must be practised in every subject.This argument will be proven by looking at how equality has revolutionized the era of modern world, which is considered as impossible without the contribution of either sex alone.
For one, if people from different gender will interact with each other, this will provide off shot results.For example in the field of obstetrics and gynaecology it has been observed that interaction in addition to history taking goes better with the same sex while opposite is true during labour.This makes it clear that both of the gender when collaborate together result in more advantageous outcome.As this shows every teaching institute should provide identical opportunities without any discrimination on the basis of sex.
In addition to this male and female student when studies at the same place it will provide reliable ways to face the opposite gender later in life.An instance illustrating this in action is, several of the studies conducted in different universities have proved that those students who have been graduated from co-education universities are proven later in life as ore-eminent parents and employees.Thus not only proves to be beneficial at university life but also has impact on social life.It is obvious from that universities should open their door in every field they offer to both males and females.
Following this look at the interaction of different genders that has been proved to be beneficial and provides reliable ways to face the opposite gender later in life, it has been proven that equality in education has more pros than cons. Hence it is recommended that every university should focus on there policy for seat allocation in such a manner that both male and female should be given equal opportunities.

[Syed-Nouman]

Please seniors, simon and friends assess my writing, i am facing immense difficulty in writing task 2

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Gender conflict has always been central to society since the dawn of time. Throughout history females were considered easy prey and have been tested, victimised and challenged, despite proving themselves tenacious. It is agreed that equality must be practised in every subject.This argument will be proven by looking at how equality has revolutionized the modern world, which is considered as impossible without the contribution of either sex alone. (<--I don't understand this last section, "...which is considered as impossible without the contribution of either sex alone." What do you mean?)

Firstly, if men and women interact with each other, this will provide off shot (<--What does 'off shot' mean? I don't understand.) results. For example, in the field of obstetrics and gynecology it has been observed that interaction in addition to history taking goes better with the same sex, while the opposite is true during labour. This makes it clear that there are better outcomes when both genders collaborate and interact. As this shows, every educational institute should provide identical opportunities without any discrimination on the basis of sex.

In addition to this, when male and female students study at the same place, they will learn healthy ways to interact with the opposite gender later in life. An instance illustrating this in action is, several of the studies conducted in different universities have proved that those students who have graduated from co-education universities are proven later in life as pre-eminent parents and employees. This not only proves to be beneficial at university life but also has an impact on social life. It is obvious that universities should open the door in every field to both males and females.

Following this look at the interaction of genders, it has been proved to be beneficial and provide reliable ways to face the opposite gender later in life. This shows that equality in education has more pros than cons. Hence it is recommended that every university should focus on their policy for seat allocation in such a manner that both males and females should be given equal opportunities.