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Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2015 11:22 am
Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.
Discuss.
There are some people who encourage children’s competition while others think that children should co-operate with each other. There are advantages and disadvantages for both point of view.
To begin with, children could develop themselves as they compete with their classmates to win. It is common now, to have a tutor which can teach children individually and give them good enlightenment, namely more than they get at school. Nowadays, every pupil at school and student at lyceum or college wants to enroll to the university, thus children in our country strive to achieve this aim from their school-days. Furthermore, having a tertiary education is useful to become a part of the society, to a well-versed applicant to obtain a good job.
On the other hand, as they are excellence and busy to enter to the university and study individually with their own teachers there are odds. They become selfish. They do not help other students. But it is very important to get along with others. Because there are weak parts and strong parts for each person. Co-operating is to improve these parts. Talking with other students can help them learn a lot of things. That could also be a great opportunity to learn with their peers instead of learning alone with tutor.
In the nutshell, I strongly agree with that, children should co-operate rather than compete. In our world, nobody is perfect. People study together, work together to improve each other. Therefore, I think that parents and teachers should educate children to co-operate, not to compete.
Discuss.
There are some people who encourage children’s competition while others think that children should co-operate with each other. There are advantages and disadvantages for both point of view.
To begin with, children could develop themselves as they compete with their classmates to win. It is common now, to have a tutor which can teach children individually and give them good enlightenment, namely more than they get at school. Nowadays, every pupil at school and student at lyceum or college wants to enroll to the university, thus children in our country strive to achieve this aim from their school-days. Furthermore, having a tertiary education is useful to become a part of the society, to a well-versed applicant to obtain a good job.
On the other hand, as they are excellence and busy to enter to the university and study individually with their own teachers there are odds. They become selfish. They do not help other students. But it is very important to get along with others. Because there are weak parts and strong parts for each person. Co-operating is to improve these parts. Talking with other students can help them learn a lot of things. That could also be a great opportunity to learn with their peers instead of learning alone with tutor.
In the nutshell, I strongly agree with that, children should co-operate rather than compete. In our world, nobody is perfect. People study together, work together to improve each other. Therefore, I think that parents and teachers should educate children to co-operate, not to compete.