Please, evaluate my IELTS writing task1
Posted: Tue Feb 04, 2014 7:00 pm
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The graph shows the number of X disease affected people of Someland during the years from 1960 to 1995. The most people suffered this disease is almost 500, but reduced to zero over the times going on.
According to the graph, X disease did not harmed to much as it was under 110 until 1965, but increased double the figure and got a new dimension was about 200 in 1970, which was 3 times less than was about 500 in 1975 and remained stabled for next 5 years. Both, 1975 and 1980 were the epidemic years for the Someland citizens.
The scope of X disease turned down rapidly to 350 and felt to 0 over the decade, while it was the peaked. After the year 1990 the X did not last too much than it was in before, and felt constant zero.
To sum of, a lot of people had faced badly experience due to X disease, and the average affected people were under 200, with some exceptions such as 1975,1980 as well as 1985, but reached out to 0 figure in lastly.
The graph shows the number of X disease affected people of Someland during the years from 1960 to 1995. The most people suffered this disease is almost 500, but reduced to zero over the times going on.
According to the graph, X disease did not harmed to much as it was under 110 until 1965, but increased double the figure and got a new dimension was about 200 in 1970, which was 3 times less than was about 500 in 1975 and remained stabled for next 5 years. Both, 1975 and 1980 were the epidemic years for the Someland citizens.
The scope of X disease turned down rapidly to 350 and felt to 0 over the decade, while it was the peaked. After the year 1990 the X did not last too much than it was in before, and felt constant zero.
To sum of, a lot of people had faced badly experience due to X disease, and the average affected people were under 200, with some exceptions such as 1975,1980 as well as 1985, but reached out to 0 figure in lastly.