Please evaluate this essay Academic writing --TASK 2
Posted: Sat May 09, 2015 2:05 am
the view is whether universities should receive the same number of males and females in each subject agree or disagree
With the significant alteration in education and social value appeared, Some people appealed to receive the equal number of males and females in each subjects in universities. This essay will analyse this point of view.
This method is able to bring lots of advantages both to the individuals and the pub particularly in the social opportunities not only in high education but also in finding jobs. By this means the bias exsist in the companies and government will disappear since they have no choice but seeing everyone equally, though males have the priority in logical ability and physical power。 As a result, the resources of human are more likely to allocate evenly.
Even if this measure contributes a lot to social equality, it sees more deficiency than priority, On the one hand, there are different preference in major for men and women, forcing both of them to learn civil engineering is just waste of resource ,on the other hand, the more important is that this way can not utilize far the advantage which is different in terms of gender. For instance, women are excelled at communicating and negotiating with the business partners while men are brilliant in logic and technology. It is obvious that accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject will damage the current education system which has achieved a balance in students , facilities and othear available resource.
Consequently, universities should distribute the resource in a more productive way rather than arranging them evenly.
With the significant alteration in education and social value appeared, Some people appealed to receive the equal number of males and females in each subjects in universities. This essay will analyse this point of view.
This method is able to bring lots of advantages both to the individuals and the pub particularly in the social opportunities not only in high education but also in finding jobs. By this means the bias exsist in the companies and government will disappear since they have no choice but seeing everyone equally, though males have the priority in logical ability and physical power。 As a result, the resources of human are more likely to allocate evenly.
Even if this measure contributes a lot to social equality, it sees more deficiency than priority, On the one hand, there are different preference in major for men and women, forcing both of them to learn civil engineering is just waste of resource ,on the other hand, the more important is that this way can not utilize far the advantage which is different in terms of gender. For instance, women are excelled at communicating and negotiating with the business partners while men are brilliant in logic and technology. It is obvious that accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject will damage the current education system which has achieved a balance in students , facilities and othear available resource.
Consequently, universities should distribute the resource in a more productive way rather than arranging them evenly.
And, remember, uncountable nouns are, well, uncountable...and cannot be plural (in most circumstances!). If this doesn't work, my advice is very very simple...ALWAYS leave time to review your essay...in this time,