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Posted: Sun May 17, 2015 10:06 am
The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology
collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce
reliable forecasts.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown
below.
words = 149
The figure depicts the process how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers information in order to innovate plausible forecasts. According to the image, the process of forecasting highly rely on source of data while main hub is entirely responsible for the outcomes of broadcasting devices.
The process begins when the incoming information is received by the satellite. These data are transferred to a satellite photo, and a radar screen via radar, from satellite. Similarly, a synoptic chart obtains it from those two sources including drifting buoy. These messages are analyzed and forecasted, and then transmitted to main computer.
Those data acquired by main hub are gathered for preparing the broadcast. Once the information has been created for distribution, it is thus conveyed to broadcasting devices such as television, radio and recorded announcement. These devices publish information in audio and video format where it approaches final stage of the process.
collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce
reliable forecasts.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown
below.
words = 149
The figure depicts the process how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology gathers information in order to innovate plausible forecasts. According to the image, the process of forecasting highly rely on source of data while main hub is entirely responsible for the outcomes of broadcasting devices.
The process begins when the incoming information is received by the satellite. These data are transferred to a satellite photo, and a radar screen via radar, from satellite. Similarly, a synoptic chart obtains it from those two sources including drifting buoy. These messages are analyzed and forecasted, and then transmitted to main computer.
Those data acquired by main hub are gathered for preparing the broadcast. Once the information has been created for distribution, it is thus conveyed to broadcasting devices such as television, radio and recorded announcement. These devices publish information in audio and video format where it approaches final stage of the process.