Band 8 - Letter assessment required please
Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2015 4:38 pm
You work in a busy but poorly organised office and you are keen to be promoted. Your employer needs to find a new supervisor for your department.
Write a letter to your employer. In the letter
ask to be considered for this job
explain why you would be a suitable candidate
outline the current problems and the changes you would like to make
___________________________________________________________________________________
Dear Sir,
My name is Faty and i am working at your prestigious organisation as an executive for last five years. My reason in writing this letter is to highlight few points that are affecting company's growth. I would also like to express my interest to play a positive role towards further development.
Last week we attended a conference that represented declining profit trends. Major reasons for the downfall were found to be excessive work load and individual performance. Also, the quality of work did not meet customer's satisfaction and complaint tickets logged on website are now growing exponentially.
If i had the authority, I would have distributed work among peers according to individual capacity and performance.In addition to it, streamlining hierarchy and managing resources for quality work would have been on priority in my department.
I have witnesses this organisation going through thick and thins since my joining. Having in-depth knowledge of systems and regulations, I would like to put my interest for being a Manager of my department so I can play my part for company's well-being.
In anticipation for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Faty
Write a letter to your employer. In the letter
ask to be considered for this job
explain why you would be a suitable candidate
outline the current problems and the changes you would like to make
___________________________________________________________________________________
Dear Sir,
My name is Faty and i am working at your prestigious organisation as an executive for last five years. My reason in writing this letter is to highlight few points that are affecting company's growth. I would also like to express my interest to play a positive role towards further development.
Last week we attended a conference that represented declining profit trends. Major reasons for the downfall were found to be excessive work load and individual performance. Also, the quality of work did not meet customer's satisfaction and complaint tickets logged on website are now growing exponentially.
If i had the authority, I would have distributed work among peers according to individual capacity and performance.In addition to it, streamlining hierarchy and managing resources for quality work would have been on priority in my department.
I have witnesses this organisation going through thick and thins since my joining. Having in-depth knowledge of systems and regulations, I would like to put my interest for being a Manager of my department so I can play my part for company's well-being.
In anticipation for your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Faty