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Some people say that education system is the only critical factor to development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Definitely, the education systems are very important in countries and societies development, but, are they the main parameter?
We must acknowledge that, even without so many educated people, a country is able to make developments and makes its people rich or successful. This may be achieved by investing on mines, minerals, oil fields, etc. but using talented and trained specialists from other countries.
But no one can deny that in this way, we will lose much of our profit because the technology used is brought by foreigners because we do not own a sophisticated educating system to help us bring up scientists which in turn make new technologies available for us. In addition, I think this may result in very low self-confidence by the young eager people of the country to see every important task and project is being done just by foreign specialists and they’ve been put aside because they do not have the necessary skill which is the outcome of a low-level faulty educating system.
Moreover, a well-planned educating system will let us all the talents in any field including art, industry or science to flourish and help the country to develop in all of those. Useful applied courses along well teaching techniques presented by professionals will definitely pave the way for any boy or girl to focus on his / her talents and become a very knowledgeable and perfect one in that regard.
In conclusion, to my opinion, sophisticated educating systems will lead to prepare talented men and women and so play a key role in a country development path.