Please evaluate my essay
Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2015 5:19 pm
Governments should not have to provide care or financial support for elderly people because it is the responsibility of each person to prepare for retirement and support him or herself. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, many people may consider goverments not to care and support for elderly people and a man has responsibility to prepare for his own life in the future since his youth. Even though people have their reasons to say that; I believe we should give a hand to the other who have bad lucks or wrong steps in their lives.
First of all, a man always need to save a little for his retirement when his health was too weak to work. For intances, Vietnamese people, including me, work really hard when we were young; our salary was usually pay a few in insurrance besides using for the cost of living. Then, this money was deposited to National Treasury; and we could live our old-times on retired payment which government withdraw from social budget. Therefore we are available to help ourselves and even our family when we retired without any support from public severices.
However, life can be considered as continual struggle and there are always people who need help. In fact, many people find it hard to earn money much enough to pay for their necessities. We have many reasons for low salary and poverty such as unskilled workers, unemployment, wrong investment. When these bad-luck people got too old to work, they would come to live on the street and become homelesses or bedgards. So that, it is encougrages for society to support these poor elders with a little funds for a meal or a place to sleep.
In short, it is necessary for people to get ready for their future but also essential for goverment to support approriate individuals who were really need help.
Nowadays, many people may consider goverments not to care and support for elderly people and a man has responsibility to prepare for his own life in the future since his youth. Even though people have their reasons to say that; I believe we should give a hand to the other who have bad lucks or wrong steps in their lives.
First of all, a man always need to save a little for his retirement when his health was too weak to work. For intances, Vietnamese people, including me, work really hard when we were young; our salary was usually pay a few in insurrance besides using for the cost of living. Then, this money was deposited to National Treasury; and we could live our old-times on retired payment which government withdraw from social budget. Therefore we are available to help ourselves and even our family when we retired without any support from public severices.
However, life can be considered as continual struggle and there are always people who need help. In fact, many people find it hard to earn money much enough to pay for their necessities. We have many reasons for low salary and poverty such as unskilled workers, unemployment, wrong investment. When these bad-luck people got too old to work, they would come to live on the street and become homelesses or bedgards. So that, it is encougrages for society to support these poor elders with a little funds for a meal or a place to sleep.
In short, it is necessary for people to get ready for their future but also essential for goverment to support approriate individuals who were really need help.