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Some people believe that cooking skills is important and it should be reached at school While others think that it as jut waste of time.
Describe both views and give your opinion

Extracurricular activities help in nurturing the students in various ways which makes them self-dependent. A student can be engaged in doing such activities apart from their curriculum which can even help them in pursuing their hobbies in future as career path.
In one side of it, a student should be taught cooking as a part of curriculum which can help in making more independent .This will not only help in learning something new but also makes them more independent. For example, in a globalized world lot of student’s moves out of their place/countries to pursue their dreams, a food plays a vital role. If you know cooking then it would certainly help you to have your staple food rather than suppress your hunger.
On the other side, this activity may take up a lot of good time and shouldn’t be compelled to students something for which he/she is not interested.
However, it should be an optional thing which can be exposed to the students only by their interest which can help them in grooming and make self-sustainable in the globalized world which can be later pursued as one of the career opportunities.

[DJvj]

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