Writing task 1- EU goods exports to Brazil and Russia

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The charts display EU goods exports to both Brazil and Russia in 2010 and 2011. While Germany, Italy and France account for the lion’s share of the EU exports to Brazil, German and Other nations that were not named in the pie chart make up an significant part of the EU exports to Russia data.

It is apparent that Germany accounts for one third, 33%, of the goods exported to Brazil following by Italy, France and Spain with 14%, 11% and 8%, respectively. A figure of 7% was recorded for Belgium, UK and Other. Some significant smaller values of 5%, 4%, 3% and 1% are seen for Netherlands, Sweden, Austria and Finland.
More than half of the pie, 56%, is allotted to Germany and Other regarding EU goods exported to Russia. Declining figures of 9% and 7% were seen among Italy, Netherlands and France. The rest 21% is made up from Spain, Sweden, UK, Austria, Belgium and Finland.

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The charts display EU goods exports to both Brazil and Russia in 2010 and 2011. While Germany, Italy and France account for the lion’s share of the EU exports to Brazil, Germany and other nations that were not named in the pie chart make up a significant part of the EU exports to Russia.

It is apparent that Germany accounts for one third, 33%, of the goods exported to Brazil, followed by Italy, France and Spain with 14%, 11% and 8%, respectively. A figure of 7% was recorded for Belgium, UK and other nations. Some significant smaller values of 5%, 4%, 3% and 1% are seen for Netherlands, Sweden, Austria and Finland.

More than half of all exports, 56%, is allotted to Germany and other nations regarding EU goods exported to Russia. Decreasing figures of 9% and 7% were seen among Italy, Netherlands and France. The remaining 21% is made up of exports from Spain, Sweden, UK, Austria, Belgium and Finland.