Please have a look at my Academic Writing
Posted: Sun Mar 02, 2014 4:07 pm
The task was taken out of the IELTS Cambridge book 8. It can be viewed by clicking the following link.
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My Writing:
As can be seen from the pie chart, there are three principal reasons for farmland to become increasingly fruitless, with over-grazing being the main one. The table shows in what manner the regions North America, Europe and Oceania were influenced by these three main causes of agriculture land degradation in 1990.
According to the pie chart, over-grazing accounted for thirty-five percent of farmland becoming less productive, while deforestation caused around thirty percent of the worldwide agriculture land to become degraded, being the second most severe reason. The least impact of the three main reasons had the over-cultivation of farmland at twenty-eight percent. There were also other Reasons responsible for seven percent of the worldwide agriculture land to become less productive which are no further specified.
The table shows that Europe had contained the highest amount of degraded farmland at twenty-three percent, with deforestation causing the highest amount of damage. This Region was followed by Oceania with thirteen percent of the agricultural land being degraded, which could be blamed upon over-grazing. Finally, North America had had the least proportion of degraded farmland at only five percent with over-cultivation being mostly responsible.
http://ielts-yasi.englishlab.net/Book%2 ... ,%20AC.JPG
My Writing:
As can be seen from the pie chart, there are three principal reasons for farmland to become increasingly fruitless, with over-grazing being the main one. The table shows in what manner the regions North America, Europe and Oceania were influenced by these three main causes of agriculture land degradation in 1990.
According to the pie chart, over-grazing accounted for thirty-five percent of farmland becoming less productive, while deforestation caused around thirty percent of the worldwide agriculture land to become degraded, being the second most severe reason. The least impact of the three main reasons had the over-cultivation of farmland at twenty-eight percent. There were also other Reasons responsible for seven percent of the worldwide agriculture land to become less productive which are no further specified.
The table shows that Europe had contained the highest amount of degraded farmland at twenty-three percent, with deforestation causing the highest amount of damage. This Region was followed by Oceania with thirteen percent of the agricultural land being degraded, which could be blamed upon over-grazing. Finally, North America had had the least proportion of degraded farmland at only five percent with over-cultivation being mostly responsible.