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Writing Task 2. Please check my Introduction.

Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2015 6:34 pm
by Jasur
Topic:

Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a difference.

Discuss both these views and your opinion.


My Intro:

It is believed by some idividuals that people can take preventative measures of world climate change. However, others think that the act of individuals is worthless and that can be more effected by governments and entrepreneurs. In my view, both people and governments are able to influence on it.

Re: Writing Task 2. Please check my Introduction.

Posted: Fri Oct 23, 2015 1:05 am
by Paul Davey
Hi Jasur
Your introduction is pretty good, but we can polish it up a bit:
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