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Posted: Sun Nov 22, 2015 8:59 pm
These two charts illustrate the current status of the postgraduates and graduates students who had not gotten a full-time job in the UK in 2008.
Overall, students would have 4 destinations if they did not get the full- time work. In these two type of students, the vest majority was further study. There were 29,665 students from graduates and 2,725 students from postgraduates. On the other hand, a small minority students chose voluntary work. There were 3,500 students from graduate and 345 from postgraduate.
Nearly as student selected part time work as were unemployment in graduates students. However, postgraduates students who had a part time job as popular as further study. There were nearly one thousand students difference between part-time work and unemployment.
To sum up, the number of graduates students were much more than the postgraduates students. Moreover, most of them would like to get an advanced degree, and rare of them would like to do a voluntary work.
Thank you!!
Overall, students would have 4 destinations if they did not get the full- time work. In these two type of students, the vest majority was further study. There were 29,665 students from graduates and 2,725 students from postgraduates. On the other hand, a small minority students chose voluntary work. There were 3,500 students from graduate and 345 from postgraduate.
Nearly as student selected part time work as were unemployment in graduates students. However, postgraduates students who had a part time job as popular as further study. There were nearly one thousand students difference between part-time work and unemployment.
To sum up, the number of graduates students were much more than the postgraduates students. Moreover, most of them would like to get an advanced degree, and rare of them would like to do a voluntary work.
Thank you!!