Here is writing task 1 -letter for general Ielts

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michaelsu2016
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Here is writing task 1 -letter for general Ielts

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Writing task 1 (a letter)

You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend and say

- What was the accident?
- When did it happen?
- Suggest how the damage can be fixed.
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Dear John,

How is your holiday going? I hope you have a great time there. I am writing to tell you an accident happened last night in your kitchen and proposing a quick fix for that.

As you know, I have been looking after your apartment since you went for vacation last week. Everything was fine until a terrifying accident I encountered in the kitchen. I was ready to cook some food at 7pm yesterday as usual. I turned on the light of the range hood and the light was broken. Then I tried to change the bulb, which unfortunately caused the short circuit of the whole kitchen.

I am really sorry about the inconvenience to which you have been put. I would like to suggest to buy a new fuse for replacement, so I could check out whether it caused other damages in the appliances there. If so, this should be just a simple fix.

Please let me know what you think and hope this small accident doesn't ruin your mood in your holiday.

Best Regards,
Michael

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Are there any improvements that can be done to move it to a higher band? Thanks a lot.
I am preparing for a test on Dec 5. :)
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Re: Here is writing task 1 -letter for general Ielts

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michaelsu2016 wrote:Writing task 1 (a letter)

You recently stayed at your friend’s place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend and say

- What was the accident?
- When did it happen?
- Suggest how the damage can be fixed.
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Dear John,

How is your holiday going? I hope you are having a great time there. I am writing to tell you an accident happened last night in your kitchen and proposing a quick fix for that.

As you know, I have been looking after your apartment since you left on vacation last week. Everything was fine until last night. I was ready to cook some food at 7pm yesterday as usual. I turned on the light of the range hood and the light was broken. I tried to change the bulb, which unfortunately caused the short circuit of the whole kitchen.

I am really sorry about the inconvenience to which you have been put. I am going to buy a new fuse as a replacement, so I can check out whether it caused other damage to the appliances. If so, this should be just a simple fix.

Please let me know what you think and I hope this small accident doesn't ruin your mood on your holiday.

Best Regards,
Michael

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Great job. Good luck for your exam!
michaelsu2016
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Re: Here is writing task 1 -letter for general Ielts

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Thank you Flick for correcting my writing!
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