kindly assess my writing task 1
Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2015 1:23 pm
The bar graph compares the telephone calls duration in billion of minutes , for the fixed
line both for local and international calls and for mobile calls , in UK from 1992 to
2002 .
It can be clearly seen that the fixed line local calls has gradually increased in the
period of 1995 to 1999 , reaching it's peak in 1999 , increased by 18 billion of minutes
in contrast to 1995 . Ever since , a gradual decrease started until 2002 reaching an
approximate of 72 billion of minutes which is approximately equal to the initial value
in 1995 .
International call fixed line started with a low number in contrast to the local calls
in 1992 , then the numbers started to increase gradually until 2002 , an increase by 24
billion of minutes .
Mobiles calls numbers where very low in 1992 about 3 billion of minutes and started to
increase until 1999 . In 2000 the increase in mobile calls was about twice the 1999 year
and the huge increase continued until 2002 .
In conclusion , the graph shows that mobile calls affected tge fixed line calls , especially
in 2000 , 2001 and 2002 .
line both for local and international calls and for mobile calls , in UK from 1992 to
2002 .
It can be clearly seen that the fixed line local calls has gradually increased in the
period of 1995 to 1999 , reaching it's peak in 1999 , increased by 18 billion of minutes
in contrast to 1995 . Ever since , a gradual decrease started until 2002 reaching an
approximate of 72 billion of minutes which is approximately equal to the initial value
in 1995 .
International call fixed line started with a low number in contrast to the local calls
in 1992 , then the numbers started to increase gradually until 2002 , an increase by 24
billion of minutes .
Mobiles calls numbers where very low in 1992 about 3 billion of minutes and started to
increase until 1999 . In 2000 the increase in mobile calls was about twice the 1999 year
and the huge increase continued until 2002 .
In conclusion , the graph shows that mobile calls affected tge fixed line calls , especially
in 2000 , 2001 and 2002 .