I am really appreciate if you can spend some time to review my task 1 general training writing as below.
Your help is greatly appreciated.
Di Truong
Topic:
One thing in your apartment has been broken and a staff has been sent to fix it. However, you are not satisfied with the fix. Write a letter to the building management team to complain about it.
You should mention in your letter:
- What was broken?
- Why are you not satisfied with the fix?
- What you need the manager to do?
You should start your letter with Dear Sir/Madam
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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Di Truong, who is currently living in the room 2702 at your Onnut Building; and I am writing to complain about the poor quality of remedy which has been done to my bathroom's door.
As you may know, two weeks ago, a bizarre sound was found whenever my bathroom's door was opened or closed. As a result, I submitted a request to fix it. In response to my request, a repairman has promptly been sent to remedy the problem. And I found it really pleasure to receive such a quick response.
However, two days after the staff had left, the door has been malfunctioning again. I am now not even able to close it as smoothly as before. Hence, I am not really satisfied with what had been done to fix the problem.
Therefore, I would be grateful if you could ask your staff to immediately have my bathroom's door substituted.
I am looking forward to your prompt action.
Yours faithfully,
Di Truong
