task 2 (1)

[Wayfarer]

Topic: In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These days they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous.
What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect sports themselves?

The changing nature of life has transformed the source of motivation for sportsmen. Unlike old days when sportspeople used to prioritize the victory in a competition or personal achievements over such things as prominence or a financial prize, today it is vice versa. Although people have no right to judge them as the performance they demonstrate is what really counts, there have been concerns regarding their negative influence on youth since they need to embody noble sportsmanship.

In fact, the factors inspiring our current sportsmen have to be taken into account. Provided that fame and money are their primary objectives, then children who often regard outstanding sportsmen as role models have a tendency to imitate their character. While there may be respectable traits that would be valuable for the youth, desire to be prominent and rich may encourage young people to build up a materialistic personality rather than spiritual. That is to say, they are very likely to favour luxury to our civilised principles and common sense. As a result, notoriety and reward will probably prevail in the mind-set of the next generations.

In addition to this, such aspirations of world-leading sportspeople may even dismiss the traditional values of sport. The ideals like cooperation, competition, friendship, modesty and respect to other participants are likely to fade. In UFC, for example, there has recently been a world tournament, in which two American fighters were berating, accusing and showing complete disrespect to one another in pursuit of drawing other peoples attention to themselves. This behaviour represented the absurdity and lack of dignity in many of todays sportsmen. If their attitude towards sport does not change, it will definitely deteriorate peoples view of sport.

Thus, it is crucially important to understand that popularity and monetary reward cannot be the uppermost aims of any respectable sportsman.

[Max maximus]

Your essay quite good. Keep up working man

[Flick]

Topic: In the past, sporting champions used to be motivated primarily by the desire to win a match or to break world records. These days they are more likely to be motivated by prize money and the opportunity to be famous.
What message does this send to young people and how does this attitude to sport affect sports themselves?

The changing nature of life has transformed the source of motivation for sportsmen. Unlike the old days when sportspeople used to prioritize the victory in a competition or personal achievements over such things as prominence or a financial prize, today it is the opposite. Although people have no right to judge them as the performance they demonstrate is what really counts, there have been concerns regarding their negative influence on youth since sportsmen are expected to embody noble sportsmanship.

In fact, the factors inspiring our current sportsmen have to be taken into account. Provided that fame and fortune are their primary objectives, then children who often regard outstanding sportsmen as role models have a tendency to imitate their character. While there may be respectable traits that would be valuable for the youth, desire to be prominent and rich may encourage young people to build up a materialistic personality rather than a spiritual one. That is to say, they are very likely to favour luxury over civilised principles and common sense. As a result, notoriety and reward will probably prevail in the mind-set of future generations.

In addition to this, such aspirations of world-leading sportspeople may even dismiss the traditional values of sport. The ideals like cooperation, competition, friendship, modesty and respect to other participants are likely to fade. In UFC, for example, there has recently been a world tournament in which two American fighters were arguing, accusing and showing complete disrespect to one another in pursuit of drawing other peoples attention to themselves. This behaviour represented the absurdity and lack of dignity in many of today's sportsmen. If their attitude towards sport does not change, it will definitely deteriorate people's view of sport.

Thus, it is crucially important to understand that popularity and monetary reward cannot be the uppermost aims of any respectable sportsman.