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Hi all,

I have a question regarding shuffling the order of structure in a sentence as such the original one is

-> Though this is not a good solution to stop people driving car to commute, it does help to mitigate traffic congestion during peak hours.

And is it accurate that this sentence is converted as follow?

-> This solution does help, though it is not a good one to stop people driving car to commute, to mitigate traffic congestion during peak hours.

Thanks for your comments

The first rendering is correct. The second is awkward and unclear.