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Children unhealthy lifestyle

Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2016 5:27 am
by niloomon
Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Living in a world covered by technology, has widely changed human’s life. Nowadays, people, either young or old, prefer to do things in their easier way, they use lifts rather than taking stairs, they drive to work, they prefer to eat fast foods, even children like to play computer games, not the old, active, happy games. This change has issued lots of challenges to parents and schools to find a way to change these unhealthy patterns. But the question is “Who is responsible for these unhealthy habits?”
Many people believe children are just doing things they see or they have been told to do at home. These days parents are busy working most of their time hence they don not have much time to spend with their kids, taking them to a park or playing active games. Many parents rather a nice, quiet and polite kid than a naughty one so they easily accustom their kids to computer games and smart phones. Also living in apartments with limited areas has affected children’s lifestyle.
Children spend most of their day at school, near their friends and teachers. Some people believe new teaching techniques using new gadgets in schools can have a bad effect on children. They believe using these technologies make children become used to technology for doing every single thing in their lives. Also their reading and writing abilities can be abated by these new methods.
Technology and facing its abysmal affects have always been a challenging subject. Nowadays children are born in a word full of different gadgets and the point is to teach them how to handle its disadvantages and take the most out of it.

Re: Children unhealthy lifestyle

Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2016 9:19 am
by David.IELTS.Examiner
Hello!

We need a question!

David

Re: Children unhealthy lifestyle

Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2016 10:19 am
by niloomon
David.IELTS.Examiner wrote:Hello!

We need a question!

David
Hello
Is it better now?
Regards

Re: Children unhealthy lifestyle

Posted: Mon Feb 15, 2016 8:32 pm
by Flick
niloomon wrote:Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Living in a world covered by technology has widely changed human life. Nowadays, people, both young and old, prefer to do things the easyway. They use lifts rather than taking the stairs, they drive to work, they prefer to eat fast foods, even children like to play computer games, not old fashioned, active, happy games. This change has caused lots of challenges for parents and schools to find a way to change these unhealthy patterns. But the question is, “Who is responsible for these unhealthy habits?”(<--The essay question is 'Who is responsible for solving the issue?' not 'Who caused the issue?')

Many people believe children are just doing things they see or they have been told to do at home. These days, parents are busy working most of the day, so they don't have much time to spend with their kids by taking them to a park or playing active games. Many parents prefer a nice, quiet and polite kid than a naughty one, so they encourage their children to play computer games and use smart phones. Also, living in apartments with limited space /color] has affected children’s lifestyles.

Children spend most of their day at school, near their friends and teachers. Some people believe new teaching techniques using new gadgets in schools can have a bad effect on children. They believe using these technologies make children become used to technology for doing every single thing in their lives. Also, their reading and writing abilities can be negatively impacted by these new methods.

Technology and facing its abysmal affects have always been a challenging subject.(<--Reword to: "The impact technology is having on our lives is a challenging topic.") Nowadays, children are born in a word full of different gadgets and the point is to teach them how to handle the disadvantages while making the most out of it.