Please anyone give a comment, Task 1

[mkhitaryan]

The table presents the partial list of species of birds observed in Woodchuck Country during winter and summer. In total eight categorize of birds are summarized in the list. Based on the information on the table the species can be divided in two groups: migrating and non-migrating. Bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles and vireos are considered as migrating birds as they appear in this area only during the summer season. These birds spend their breeding season in warm areas and migrate back during winter. In contrast, cardinals, crows and woodpeckers are permanent residence of Woodchuck Country as they are observed during all the year. These birds can be classified to the non-migrating ones. Their unique features give them an opportunity to bear cold winter days and stay warm all through the year. One species of birds-juncos- are observed in the area only in winter. It is believed that these birds travel far more distances to spend summertime there.

[niloo]

Dear mkhitaryan
I think it is not a good idea to add your ideas and personal information in writing task 1 because this task is about writing a report about what you visually see. In writing task 2 it is okay if you are asked to write your opinion.
Regards

[mkhitaryan]

Thank you very much for the comment. It is my first essay on Task 1. Next time I will not include my opinion in the text

[Flick]

The table presents the partial list of species of birds observed in Woodchuck Country during winter and summer. In total, eight species of birds are summarized in the list. Based on the information in the table, the species can be divided in two groups: migrating and non-migrating. Bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles and vireos are considered as migrating birds as they appear in this area only during the summer season. These birds spend their breeding season in warmer climates and migrate back during winter. In contrast, cardinals, crows and woodpeckers are permanent residents of Woodchuck Country as they are observed throughout the year. These birds can be classified as non-migrating. Their unique features allow them to bear cold winter days and stay warm all through the year. One species of bird, juncos, are observed in the area only in winter. It is believed that these birds travel greater distances to spend summertime there.

[mkhitaryan]

Thank you very much for the grammar check. It is very helpful