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ucheoma
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Given is an image describing the process of photography from an automatic photo booth.From the image it cab be deduced that there are two parts to the photo booth.

Descriptively, the booth has a payment and imaging sections.The latter has a seat,a curtain and a mirro while the former have a counter where payment are made.

It is expected that the customer seats comfortably using the adjustable stool provided in the imaging section, he then closes the curtain and face the mirror making sure his visual level is same as the mirror.He then waits for 3 seconds for light signal to prompt.

When the signal prompts the picture is taken automatically from the machine and then the customers goes to the counter session and deposit his coins into the counter.There is an option for a black and white or coloured picture depending on the customer's need . Likewise,there is also the option for a large format or four passport sized photos.

After payment,photo is delivered in sixty seconds.However as a ceveat,it is instructed that passport photos should come only in colored form
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Re: pls review.see attachment also

Post by David.IELTS.Examiner »

Hello!

You have included all the required information and the layout is clear. Grammar is very good! This diagram has many labels, making it difficult for the candidate to show their ability using unprovided vocab. However, you have done well.

All the best,
David
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Thank you David
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