writing task 1 ,please grade it of 9 bands

[wajidnaeem]

The diagram shows how tea leaves are processed into five tea types.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words
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The diagram depicts The process by which different type of teas are produced . over all , it can be seen that tea Processing starts from leaves growth and after going through various stages , final product Can be seen in the form or five different teas.
The first step in the making of tea is the leaf growth ,which are then pluck And introduce to withering . Once they are wilted white tea is extracted by simply oven drying while others like green tea is steamed , Rolled and oven dried during the whole process . One special strain of tea is Usually rolled after a wilting and then It is introduce to fermentation which is then placed Into oven and dry it before The final product Is formed .
Large leaf black tea and small leaf black tea usually go through rolling and crushing in separate chambers before they are fully fermented in the next stage. They are placed In the oven for the last step before they are separated into two different type of tea leaves ...

[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hello!

Overall a reasonable description of the various processes. Grammar and vocabulary are quite good but we can see that accurate use of vocabulary drops significantly when you use lexical items that are not given on the chart.

All the best,
David