critic needed.Exan date is 19th March

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BIG SALARY IS MUCH MORE IMPORTANT THAN JOB SATISFACTION.IT’S MORE ADVANTEGOUS TO CHOOSE A JOB WITH HIGH WAGE,EVEN IF IT DOESN’T APPEAL TO YOU AT ALL.

DO U AGREE OR DISAGREE.PROVIDE RELEVANT EXAMPLE IF NECESSARY.

As the price of oil hits the skies, the cost of living gets higher. Consequently, So many factors influence choice for a job. Remuneration is top among the list of things to consider. So many job seekers now tend to consider a high salary most important than having a job satisfaction. In my opinion, money is not everything when looking for a job.

Truthfully, we all need money for day to day running of our lives. There are lots of bills to pay ranging from children’s school fees, cost of housing, car maintenance to mention but a few. This can be a reason to seek for a high paying job when condition of work is unfavourable. Employers who pay such mouth-watering salaries most times insist that his employees spend more hours at work so as to justify the reason of their pay. The consequences of this is that the workers goes home late and have little time to spend with family leading to marital problems at home.

Furthermore, in most places where high wages are paid, the institution try to cut corners and offer below par excellent services to customers in other to meet up with the high salary it pays to the workers. Such establishments are notorious and have been noted among recruiters, thereby having a damaging effect on an applicant curriculum vitae if he one day list this place as one of his past job experience.

Finally, workers in well paying company are vulnerable to reduandancy from his employers if he cannot meet up with paying high salaries. The consequences of this is that the employee can be sacked from his job at anytime. Hence job security is an important factor to consider in choosing a job

All in all, it is true that money is important in deciding a job offer but we must take into consideration time factor,job security and the type of organization where we choose to work.

[David.IELTS.Examiner]

Hello!

It seems to becoming common that I spot glaring errors in the first sentence! Oil prices are not at 'sky high' levels.

How closely do people choose a job based on oil prices?

Is money really something that is only important job-seekers NOW?

The second main paragraph needs examples.

Do you mean that the lowest paying jobs are the most secure?

Overall, use of vocabulary and grammar is mediocre and meaning is often unclear.

All the best,
David