Writing(to reach)Band 8 Task 1;2 letters,feedback Appreciated
Posted: Sun Mar 06, 2016 1:19 pm
Write a letter to your college’s administration department complaining about the college’s facilities.
In your letter include:
-what the problem is
-how this problem has affected you
-what the college should do to fix this problem
Dear Mr.John,
I am a third year research student and I am writing this letter with regards to the poor library condition of our college.
Since last 2 months, I am very disturbed because of our pathetic college library condition. It is impossible to sit, read and concentrate in the library due to the persistent noise level coming from the air conditioning. I have also seen few spots which has water leakage, many at times my clothes had stained due the dirty water seeping in from the air conditioning ducts. As you know, library is the one and the only critical source of information in order to complete my research work on time. Therefore, I am not able to concentrate and finish my work schedule sitting in the library due to the fore said problems.
I would really appreciate if you could take up the issue with the concerned maintenance staff so that they can look into the problem before it gets out of hand. I would also like to point out that the water leak could damage the important library books and this can lead to a very embarrassing situation for our college. So, I am hoping that this will be fixed as soon as possible or else I am planning to get enrolled with some other library, for which, I have to work after college hours.
I look forward to hearing back from you soon. Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Anoop
In your letter include:
-what the problem is
-how this problem has affected you
-what the college should do to fix this problem
Dear Mr.John,
I am a third year research student and I am writing this letter with regards to the poor library condition of our college.
Since last 2 months, I am very disturbed because of our pathetic college library condition. It is impossible to sit, read and concentrate in the library due to the persistent noise level coming from the air conditioning. I have also seen few spots which has water leakage, many at times my clothes had stained due the dirty water seeping in from the air conditioning ducts. As you know, library is the one and the only critical source of information in order to complete my research work on time. Therefore, I am not able to concentrate and finish my work schedule sitting in the library due to the fore said problems.
I would really appreciate if you could take up the issue with the concerned maintenance staff so that they can look into the problem before it gets out of hand. I would also like to point out that the water leak could damage the important library books and this can lead to a very embarrassing situation for our college. So, I am hoping that this will be fixed as soon as possible or else I am planning to get enrolled with some other library, for which, I have to work after college hours.
I look forward to hearing back from you soon. Thank you for your attention to this matter.
Anoop